We are always told to write in the active voice. In this post, we tell you how to move from passive voice to active voice.
If English is not your home language…
We live in a country that has 11 official languages. There is a good chance that either the writer or the reader of any given document is a second language English speaker. This makes the use of Plain Language even more valuable.
The advantages of being bilingual, or even multilingual, are endless. Your brain actually works differently, but it does mean you have to work hard to use the correct grammar.
Plain language helps
Plain language guidelines encourage the use of active voice, simpler words, and shorter sentences and paragraphs. You need to simplify your message, and you can only do that if you understand exactly what you want to say. There is no room for ambiguity with plain language.
Plain language is almost the opposite of academic writing and that is where the challenge lies. You are so used to writing and reading in this style that it makes passive voice hard to spot. Remember that it is the word order you want to change.
[Must-read: All About Parts Of Speech]
From Passive Voice To Active Voice
Subject-Verb-Object = Active
The CEO made the announcement.
Object-Verb-Subject = Passive
The announcement was made by the CEO.
Object-Verb = Passive
The announcement was made.
How to change passive voice to active voice:
- Check sentence length. The longer your sentences are, the more likely you are to lapse into the passive voice. Reduce your sentence length. Split them, if necessary.
- Identify the subject. Who is the doer in the sentence? The subject should be first. Simply ask: who does what?
- Identify the verb. It’ll help you to identify the subject.
- Identify the object. If the sentence is passive the object will be first.
- Rewrite. Rewrite to follow the subject-verb-object order.
- What if there is no subject? At times, we do not know who did what. If there is no subject you might have to leave the sentence in the passive voice, but try to figure out who is responsible.
Change these sentences into the active voice:
The report was written by Mr Jones. ACTIVE: Mr Jones wrote the report. The annual results were released by the auditors on the 23rd of June and the board was relieved when the markets rallied and the share price increased. ACTIVE: The auditors released the annual results on the 23rd of June. The markets rallied and the share price increased, much to the relief of the board. The line managers were instructed by the CEO to re-evaluate the evacuation protocols of the factory. ACTIVE: The CEO instructed the line managers to re-evaluate the evacuation protocols of the factory.
How to test it:
The Hemingway App will help to identify passive voice . You can also use readability statistics in Microsoft Word.
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by Mia Botha